This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Remember how I made a post called how to make hokey pokey, well now I have made a comic about it. You HAVE to see it because its hilarious. So have a look.
HI Arie Its James from SHS. I like the part when you put the ingredients on the sheet because I thought it will be scribble on the sheet. Did you think of putting your walt at the back of your story. You could of put a cool text on the Hokey Pokey
thats awsome i like your dogs name flyyn but next time you could make a cat as well and mayby make the dog get in trouble by the boy sees him eating the hokey pokey
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
HI Arie Its James from SHS. I like the part when you put the ingredients on the sheet because I thought it will be scribble on the sheet. Did you think of putting your walt at the back of your story. You could of put a cool text on the Hokey Pokey
ReplyDeletethats awsome i like your dogs name flyyn but next time you could make a cat as well and mayby make the dog get in trouble by the boy sees him eating the hokey pokey
ReplyDelete