This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today I wrote steps to tell people how to get their way with their parents. It was hard thinking of more steps to write but easy editing it. If you want you can try this and tell me how it works.
Hey Arie. It's Oscar from South Hornby. I liked how you made it funny. Great work on making the serious steps in bold. I remember making this too! Next time you could make the text a bit bigger! Why did you put Mr. Lenny in there?
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Today I wrote steps to tell people how to get their way with their parents. It was hard thinking of more steps to write but easy editing it. If you want you can try this and tell me how it works.
Hey Arie. It's Oscar from South Hornby. I liked how you made it funny. Great work on making the serious steps in bold. I remember making this too! Next time you could make the text a bit bigger! Why did you put Mr. Lenny in there?
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