For Activity 2 of UP IN THE AIR I have to pretend I am Neil Armstrong the first person on the Moon. I had to make a Poem Describing what it is like on the moon. It was hard writing the describing words because I do not know what it feels like because I have never been on the Moon before but it was pretty easy rhyming. Do think Space is cool? If you do then tell me.
This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 17 December 2019
UP IN THE AIR one small step for man
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Hey Arie!
ReplyDeleteMikey here. Well done on completing yet another activity! You're doing an amazing job getting through them. :)
This is a great little poem, Arie. I like how you've made it rhyme. I always find writing rhyming poetry quite tricky. Do you like doing creative writing like this?
Keep the Summer Learning Journey posts coming! I can't wait to read more soon. :)
Until then, happy blogging!
Mikey
Hello Mikey, Thank you for commenting again! I do creative writing like this so people actually want to read it but I do not just do rhymes. I also write story's about wizards and medieval stuff. Until next time, Cya!
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Mōrena Arie,
DeleteWow! Have you posted any of your stories to your blog? I'd love to read them!
Bye for now,
Mikey :)
I have posted a little bit. They are much newer posts. Cya Mikey!
ReplyDelete-Arie
Hi Arie,
DeleteOh, I'll have to have a look for them when I'm done reading all of your wonderful Summer Learning Journey posts. :)
Have a great day!
Mā te wā,
Mikey