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Tuesday, 17 December 2019

UP IN THE AIR one small step for man

For Activity 2 of UP IN THE AIR I have to pretend I am Neil Armstrong the first person on the Moon. I had to make a Poem Describing what it is like on the moon. It was hard writing the describing words because I do not know what it feels like because I have never been on the Moon before but it was pretty easy rhyming. Do think Space is cool? If you do then tell me.

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  1. Hey Arie!

    Mikey here. Well done on completing yet another activity! You're doing an amazing job getting through them. :)

    This is a great little poem, Arie. I like how you've made it rhyme. I always find writing rhyming poetry quite tricky. Do you like doing creative writing like this?

    Keep the Summer Learning Journey posts coming! I can't wait to read more soon. :)

    Until then, happy blogging!

    Mikey

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  2. Hello Mikey, Thank you for commenting again! I do creative writing like this so people actually want to read it but I do not just do rhymes. I also write story's about wizards and medieval stuff. Until next time, Cya!
    -Arie:)

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    1. Mōrena Arie,

      Wow! Have you posted any of your stories to your blog? I'd love to read them!

      Bye for now,

      Mikey :)

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  3. I have posted a little bit. They are much newer posts. Cya Mikey!
    -Arie

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    1. Hi Arie,

      Oh, I'll have to have a look for them when I'm done reading all of your wonderful Summer Learning Journey posts. :)

      Have a great day!

      Mā te wā,

      Mikey

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